I just did a refresh of American Girl. And by refresh, I mean that it’s been completely rewritten. Same characters, same general plot. What’s new is that I added a theme: Sacrifice. I think it’s probably my best story yet. I owe it all to those lusty, knowledgeable porn dogs over at ERWA. Speaking of ERWA, American Girl will be in an upcoming gallery for September (I think). I’ll post a link when it goes live. Meanwhile, it’s free over at Smashwords for the next few weeks, because I want everyone to check it out.

If you read it already, you owe it to yourself to read it again, especially if you liked the first version. Actually, I don’t even know what that means, but I’m trying to entice you to check it out. I’m so proud of it.

Okay, I’ll beg. Please go check out American Girl!

I hope you like it.

The image is not the new cover. It’s just an idea I’m toying with for future covers. Do you like it? It’s an image I found on the web and I applied some filters. I’m thinking of compositing images of pretty girls with gritty small town street scenes for Carnal, using these kinds of cartoon filters.

Thoughts?